I wrote a whumpy fanfic, and thought I'd share. Since it's a bit long I'll just post the link to ff.net.

Title: Eye of the Beast
Tagline: The team explores a new planet, but it turns out the planet is not so uninhabited as they first thought.
Tags: Adventure/Angst/Hurt/Team
Show: Stargate Atlantis
Characters: Weir, Sheppard, Teyla, Ronon, McKay, ( Read more... )

The whumpers were talking about The Shrine, and the large whump potential regarding the gate being submerged. I always wished we had seen that, and why not write it instead? So I did :P

( Head Above Water )

A loud yell echoed through the hallway as Colonel John Sheppard fell down the metal stairs.

“Sheppard!” Ronon shouted after him, jumping a few stairs at a time to get to his teammate. Moaning came from a few metres down where John lay with his eyes closed. “Sheppard!” Ronon shouted again. “Stay with me!”

“Hurts,” was all John could let ( Read more... )